I am about to write about a recent history:
some time ago I was sick, I had fever, and my maid was going to take care of myself. Around 8:00 my maid said she was going to make a remittance.
the morning before that my mother said to him that she was going to have lunch late, so my maid go to "make remittance" an hour after everybody, except me, an return to the house just before my mother, the first one to arrive to the house, and organize our home.
Like that one day I was sick my mother decided to come earlier, when she arrived she found the house without being organized. 20 minutes later my maid arrived and my mother quarrel him, after the fight my maid got fired and go a week later.
some days later, we discovered that when she go to make a "remittance" she really go to be with her husband and when she had she had the romantic moment of the day she return to organize the house.
Wow!! That really shocked us. But, well we recovered now we had a new maid and maybe we will have many more with a similar story.
The end
Ale: Nice text because it is coherent and well structure.
ReplyDeleteRemember, to use punctuation marks and the last part I do not understand it so well.
Very nice text, CONGRATS.
Good tittle for the text.
Hi alejo:
ReplyDeleteInteresting story!! Also it is organized and well structured!! But remember that after a period you have to put a capital letter and when you put the time remember to say if it is am or pm.
¡¡Bye!!
nice text , without sp mistakes
ReplyDeleteAlejo:
ReplyDeleteHi, well you need to check verb cojugation, you put him and was a girl!
You need to check punctuation.
Was a part that I didn´t understand.
Congrats.Bye